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 (1When it comes to XX, there is no agreement among people as to the issue of  XX: some people hold a positive attitude towards it while others are against it. In such  an environment where XX is playing an increasingly important role in XX, almost  XX come to believe that XX talks. There are numerous reasons(methods/approaches)  to account for the phenomenon (  或者 to contribute to this issue), I would explore the  most conspicuous ones below.   

 

第二段:One of the primary  reason(方法:method, to my mind, is that  such a  phenomenon as revealed  in the picture topic/ problemhas aroused wide-spread  social concern ,Nowhere in history has the issue been talked about so much as in our  society today. Apart from that,  the paintingtopic/ problem)  reveals an upsetting  story and similar events happened and happening are hared or reported in nearly all  aspects of our life .What is also worth noticing (considering) fact is that Enhancing peoples  awareness of such practices and setting up relevant rules and regulations ought to be  top priorities of the agenda.    

 

第三段:In conclusion,  taking into account of  the above(In brief, we may safety  (safely) arrive at the conclusion that), we may reach the conclusion that it is high time that  such stories were (should be) terminated or at least reduced. Only when such  happenings come to an end can we maintain a happy and harmonious society as we all  wish, vice and verse.

 

    第一段参考:  

What the drawing is trying to express is symbolic and philosophic ! (并列押韵, 可以说是有用的废话)Featured in the above image are two men who , each of them  having only one leg , are running forward together. (妙在 featured who,插入的 独立主格结构。这句话是得分重点,需要自己组织一个简单的切题的句子。) However ridiculous and humorous(押韵) it may seem at first glimpse ,this cartoon  does carry rather significant implications . (可以认为是有用的废话.)  

   

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1. 基础 -- 核心句写作

重要性说明:核心句写作是考研小作文和大作文的核心部分,也是临场发挥成分最大的部分,所以一定要花时间好好练习。

即便大作文不考图画作文,也一定是议论文。者也要求我们在第一段能用一句话就说清楚要评论的事物或现象,这句话也是我们现在要训练的核心句写作。

____________, 主语,_____________, 谓语 (及物动词后加宾语),_________.

具体步骤

步骤1:看清图画的主要含义,并因此确定S + V .(或者S + Vt + n)迅速写出句子。每幅图一句。 (此步重点:确定主语,也就是抓住图画中最主要的事物是关键,一般这一事物居于图画正中间) 例如             A lamp is flickering.  

 

步骤2.围绕图片主语列出所有的细节并添加到句子当中,包括:

1.找出可以修饰主语的形容词(单个的放在主语前边)A small oil lamp is flickering.

2.找出主语的同位语后加定语从句 (主语后)A small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light , is flickering.

3.找出可以修饰主语的介词短语 (主语后边)A small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering.

4.找出主语发出的其它动作,做成伴随状语,放在主语前做导入Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering.

 

步骤3 围绕谓语展开细节并添加到句子当中,包括:

1.找出可修饰动作的副词,放在谓语后Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly.

2.看看动作发生的时间和地点可不可以用介词短语来做,放谓语及副词的后边,地点在前,时间在后Standing lonely but full of

4

confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time.

3.看看句子谓语动作造成什么结果或意义没有,如果有,做成后置的伴随状语Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the timebringing brightness to everything around it.  

 

4.如果谓语动作没有造成什么结果或意义,看看有没有其它的主谓结构可以做成独立主或伴随状语,来把谓语动作细节化。

 

 

confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time.

3.看看句子谓语动作造成什么结果或意义没有,如果有,做成后置的伴随状语Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the timebringing brightness to everything around it.  

 

4.如果谓语动作没有造成什么结果或意义,看看有没有其它的主谓结构可以做成独立主或伴随状语,来把谓语动作细节化。  

步骤4 如果谓语后有宾语,再按主语扩展模式略作处理(加前后定语,尽量短)  

最终版本:Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the timebringing brightness to everything around it. 37字) 大家再看一个例子,进一步熟悉一下以上四个步骤 中外文化的融合图片描述

1. An American girl appears pleasant.

2. A beautiful young American girl appears pleasant.

3. A beautiful young American girl, an international student, appears pleasant.

4. A beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears pleasant.

5. Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears pleasant.  6. Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears

obviously pleasant.

总结:通过以上四个步骤,从定主谓入手,通过添加细节,迅速制造出一个30-40字左右的好句子作为大作文开头。

在小作文当中,也是利用同样的方法,迅速的说明事由,细节的添加主要以回答下列几个问题为主:谁(who)在什么时候(when)在什么地方(where)出于何种原因(why)通过何种方式(how)作了什么事情(what) 例如:投诉信:---对两条狗进行投诉

1. These dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble. 2. These vicious dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble.

3. These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought, were abandoned and have been causing trouble.

4. These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have been

causing trouble.

5. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have

been causing trouble.

6. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have

been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since.

7. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have

been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since, barking day and night, leaving waste everywhere, and even attacking both residents and passers-by. (44)  

下面,请大家按照刚才讲述的步骤练习写下面的句子,这是作文成功的关键,最后冲刺的几天,请一定多练

1. 起点就是终点 (提示:主语是男孩,谓语是跑向终点) 2. 温室的花朵第一幅 (提示:主语是花朵,谓语是挺立) 3. 温室的花朵第二幅 (提示:主语还是花朵,谓语是变得虚弱) 4. 把上两句话用 -------------while ----------- 的模式连成一句

 

 

提解决方案, 分个人和社会两句来写 ? 坏事

          ? 好事    

     Without this necessary habit in all public affairs of a civilized society, nothing could ever be achieved and everything will be in a chaos.

Without this necessary habit in all public affairs of a civilized society, nothing could ever be achieved and everything will be in a chaos.

Therefore, a person with no idea of love, most people believe, is an unfortunate failure in the 21centry, deprived of one of the most valuable intrinsic qualities they should possess.

Therefore, a person with no idea of love, most people believe, is an unfortunate failure in the 21centry, deprived of one of the most valuable intrinsic qualities they should possess.

说出好事的作用(第二句)

指出没有它的后果

以个人为例,

重申没有它的后果

    Once convinced of the seriousness and urgency of this issue, sb should seek to dispel their misunderstanding and put the cultivation of a more rational attitude on the agenda of priority.

     Once convinced of the seriousness and urgency of this issue, sb should seek to dispel their misunderstanding and put the cultivation of a more rational attitude on the agenda of priority.

In addition to the effort on the part of the individual, the government and departments concerned should also assume their own responsibility, pass relevant regulations and put them into force.

In addition to the effort on the part of the individual, the government and departments concerned should also assume their own responsibility, pass relevant regulations and put them into force.

Realizing the important role played by…….in our life, we should seek to fully appreciate its

true meaning and put the cultivation of a good habit / attitude on the agenda of priority.  Realizing the important role played by love in our life, we should seek to fully appreciate its true meaning and put the cultivation of a good habit / attitude on the agenda of priority.  

In addition, the government and departments concerned, once convinced of the benefit that

sth brings, should assume their own responsibilities and take necessary measures to foster this underlying current.

In addition, the government and departments concerned, once convinced of the benefit that sth brings, should assume their own responsibilities and take necessary measures to foster this underlying current


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